In the modern society, some people think that people are becoming more and more independent, while other people believe that they are more dependent. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, many hold the view that people are increasingly independent. However, there is a body of opinion which claims that it is not true and they prefer to rely more on others. . In this essay, I will examine both sides of the debate and give me opinion.
To begin with, it is undeniable that better job opportunities make people live alone. For example, many young generations from rural areas like the poor countryside in China are forced to leave their families and rent apartments in a developed city where good working environment and high salaries are provided. In addition, owing to the development of science and technology, students could do self study, as for example computers, smartphones or even robots can enable these young people to obtain knowledge on the internet instead of asking help for their teachers.
On the other hand, however, complex working environment leads to the fact that people tend to rely on others. Jobs currently become so complicated that it is impossible for a single worker to finish them without someone else’s help, which forces the employees to cooperate with one another. It’s common to see huge successful companies own more that 10 thousands employees that are divided in different varieties of departments, working together towards the same goal and depending on each other.
To summarise, there is no doubt that the good working chances make people live in big cities by themselves and they can also learn independently with the cutting-edge technology. At the same time, nevertheless, new working pattern makes it impossible for people to work on their own. In the final analysis, one can only conclude that people are becoming more and more dependent now.
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Suggestion: many holds
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, nevertheless, so, as for, for example, in addition, no doubt, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1450.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14184397163 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7778301912 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63475177305 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.0489837861 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.833333333 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.41666666667 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272608788487 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105342821915 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0760226657166 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174035692949 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.084253442731 0.056905535591 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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