Currently, there is a trend towards the use of alternative forms of medicine. However, at best these methods are ineffective and at the worst they may be dangerous. To what extent do you agree with this statement?
In this modern era, it is important that using alternative forms of medicine can be ineffective or may be hazardous. In this essay, I completely agree if there are more negative impact than positive impact in using alternative medicine.
At present, alternative medicine is a pathway to remedies various disease and this become popular for several people. Firstly, it can be a choice to relieve illness for some people who have phobia in modern treatment, such as phobia to syringe, surgery, chemotherapy, and so on. It is because some advanced technology which is used in medical field recently, can cause long-drawn pain. Secondly, price of holistic medicine which is cheaper than modern treatment with high technology and the price of the medicine is expensive. It is because in invention new method or drug is needed long time, many experiments, and high technology which is not cheap. Furthermore, existence of conventional treatment is one of ways in conserving culture which is inherited from earlier ancestor. Because older generation always teach how to cure other people who get sick with alternative treatment to the next generation. So, the culture in medical is not extinct for long-term.
In the contrary, conventional treatment have some drawbacks which can harm people, especially to children. To begin, some alternative medicines which are not researched before, do not fit and give bad responses to the body of the patient or the worst possibility is the death of the patient. Because there is only few alternative medicine which has been verified its safety, contents, side effects, and other in the laboratory. It can influence level of confidence of the patient in deciding method to treat their disease. In addition, a patient can get worse side effects from herbs, such as allergic. It is because the ingredients of the herbal medicine have not been known the proper compounds which are contained in it. Also, the alternative treatment can be more dangerous for certain patient. It is because the patient does not do medical check up, röntgen, and other tests or checking by instrument and it is only base on guessing by therapist.
To sum up, I agree that alternative treatment have more bad effects than good effects. Everybody have difference immune system, so they have to choose the best method of treatment for curing themselves.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 780, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, in addition, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 13.1623246493 198% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1981.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 386.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13212435233 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43248042346 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84879989173 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.510362694301 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 640.8 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.5639560952 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 99.05 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.85 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154169559772 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0486893519713 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0576085825248 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118998177601 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.080538463344 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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