Families who send their children to private school should not be required to pay taxes that support the state education system.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.
Paying tax to government is primarily the obligation of every citizen of a country. Although, myriad people seem that parents who send their offspring to own founded organisation for learning, should not be necessary to pay off tariffs that help the government education system. I support to this to a large extent because of private school is the only institute, which provides all basic amenities and quality education to their student, who one ideal student can expect.
Out go all the reasons, the predominant one is that private school has their own organisation committee structure and rules. This is because founded by a particular persona, under the permission of the government, rather than financially help from the State. Therefore, the government do not provide grants to these private school owners. Due to this, they have to survive school by revenue generated from the fees, which they collect from students. To illustrate by exemplify, according to a survey of Victoria University, 65% of private school owners did not support financially to the government because of the main reason is that they have to provide all basic facilities including a lab with equipped machinery and tools, sports facilities and excellent education to their students. Hence, I reckon that guardians should not be essential to pay tax to the state education organisation.
On the other hand, I would not ignore the fact that, pay tax to the state is everyone's moral duty. It is indeed true that many people consider government do not provide any financial help in terms of grants to private school, but one should not forget that private school runs only by the permission of the government. Additionally, each state has their own education board, which has authority to conduct the final exam of the students of the whole state including private school. For instance, Gujarat state education board conduct every year 10 and 12-grade student exam and this organisation approval result only valid in India. Thus, parents, who send their children to private school should pay tax to the government education system.
To conclude, it can be inferred that despite the fact that the government education system only possesses rights to give permission for the establishment of a private school and conduct the final exam of every student. I believe quality education, which they acquire only in private school in terms of a well-equipped lab, sports facilities and better teaching system. Thus, parents should not require to pay tax to the government education system.
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ach state has their own education board, which has authority to conduct the final...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'exam' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'exams'.
Suggestion: exams
...duct every year 10 and 12-grade student exam and this organisation approval result o...
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Line 7, column 403, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'paying'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: paying
...ystem. Thus, parents should not require to pay tax to the government education system....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, i reckon, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 27.0 8.3376753507 324% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2151.0 1615.20841683 133% => OK
No of words: 415.0 315.596192385 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18313253012 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7586141625 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.448192771084 0.561755894193 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 664.2 506.74238477 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.2116596448 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.529411765 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4117647059 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.94117647059 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.380227677036 0.244688304435 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141397830934 0.084324248473 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0907225398327 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.257481212979 0.151304729494 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.043906316082 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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