Today, the younger and older generation are in the same workspace. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantage?
In this contemporary world, age factors don't matter for doing a job. Due to this, in this present scenario young and old people perform their duty together at the workplace. In my opinion, I think that both age group people in the same workplace can bring more benefits to each other compared to any disadvantage it might bring.
Despite the drawback below, I believe the benefits gained by new learners from experience person extremely useful for their forthcoming future. Firstly, undoubtedly, old age people have a wide range of experience and knowledge of their field. This is because they come across by performing the same duty to their tillage. Therefore, they teach and share their life experience with the young one while performing a job. For instance, according to google survey from their employees' chances of mistakes done by junior 97% diminish owing to working with old people. Secondly, the young generation can teach the old latest technological updates and reduce their burden and worries. For example, in the mechanical engineering company, young people can teach old one how to operate cutting edge mechanical machines Which is they do by manual work because of a technophobe.
Admittedly, there are some issues involved when working together with major age difference people. The main reason is that the young mind is very ambitious. Not only they want to achieve company target before time limit but also want to make unique from all other people. However, old age people lazy by nature due to lack of physical stamina, even they don't have a life goal or desire for something achieve in their life. They work only for money so that they can survive their family. As a result, sometimes conflict occurred between these two age group people. As per times survey, multinational companies more likely to hire young people and on-site as well put them with same age group people to achieve company target.
In conclusion, it can be said that despite having some drawback of working with old people: laziness and goalless mindset, but I believe positive of this trend outweigh negative effects.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1769.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 351.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03988603989 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52395283298 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566951566952 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 564.3 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0803205921 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.2777777778 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.05555555556 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0531105059142 0.244688304435 22% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0181633145861 0.084324248473 22% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.024347104011 0.0667982634062 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0389020886843 0.151304729494 26% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0206355828796 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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