Next month you are coming to Britain to study at a university in Scotland. On the way, you have a two day 'stop-over' in London. You need accommodation for one night and you would like to use this time to see as much as possible of London. You will need to use public transport. As a student, you have a limited budget.
Write a letter to the London Travel Information Center explaining your situation and asking for advice on accommodation, sight-seeing and transport facilities in London.
Dear Sir,
With all due respect, I would like to begin by informing you that I am coming to London between 14th and 16th February on a transit to Glasgow, Scotland. I will attend a summer course in Glasgow College for the next couple of weeks. Hence, since I will be spending a couple of days in London, I am requesting some necessary information from you.
For decades, the London Transport Information Center has provided the best information for students and tourists alike and I hope you will be able to do the same for me. I will stay at a budget hotel probably near a railway station. Please let me know if there is anything between £50 to £100 for the night for a room. I need my own bathroom but also I cannot afford to pay too much for the food and accommodation since I am a student. In addition to that, if the location of the inn is within the city center, I would be able to visit the famous historical as well as the heritage sites of the city. Please let me know the best possible area and lodge that I can stay at.
Therefore, with the reasons stated above, I hope that you will provide me the best selection of hotel and also a list of places to visit. On another note, please let me know if there are any student discounts at this time of the year. I am really hoping to hear from you soon.
With Regards.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, really, so, therefore, well, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 26.3917525773 144% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1084.0 937.175257732 116% => OK
No of words: 254.0 206.0 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.26771653543 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3638970316 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 127.690721649 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566929133858 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 339.3 290.88556701 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 1.44329896907 416% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.2105945386 44.8134815571 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.3333333333 76.5299724578 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1666666667 16.8248392259 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.16666666667 4.34317383033 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247494871981 0.216113520407 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0815414792457 0.0766984524023 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0607150307672 0.0603063233224 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177410636064 0.12726935374 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0372691149032 0.0580467560999 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 70.7449484536 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.49 8.71597938144 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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