Some people think that hard working and determination are the key factors for being successful in the live, other people feel that other factors are important. Discuss both sides, what is your opinion?
Success is the dream of an every single person. It follows to a person who is industrious, studious and resolute. Though successful life is achieved by hard work and determination, other factors may play an important part in the journey of the success. All of them work together and show a guide to a person to achieve his conquest.
A person is awarded by a certain success through his hardness effort and strong destination. A diligent person works heart and soul until he accomplishes his mission. Besides, it is his strong will-power that allows him to be concentrated on his target and face the difficulties. Furthermore, long term practice, and endeavor helps to achieve his desired goal.
The road of the success has many factors that influence it to reach to its purpose. For example, skill and knowledge could help him to build up a successful career. Next, a person is needed to be brave and confident to face any new challenges on his path. Besides, a power of patient is a strong factor that allows him to be steady in any miserable situation. In addition, it is impossible to see the light of the success if a person is not concern about his proper health. And last but not the least, success may rely on fortune. Luck favors them who face up down in life and never give up.
It is said that success is not easy. It is a long pathway that takes years after years to achieve. It depends on a person himself on how he deals with his destination and difficulties. It takes great courage, sacrifice, desire and honest to gain success in life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 100, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...hat takes years after years to achieve. It depends on a person himself on how he d...
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Line 7, column 186, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... with his destination and difficulties. It takes great courage, sacrifice, desire ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, furthermore, if, may, so, for example, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1285.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62230215827 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69829492596 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535971223022 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.9788688137 49.4020404114 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 67.6315789474 106.682146367 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6315789474 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.36842105263 7.06120827912 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137455695302 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0446282656093 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0504339597345 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0851637574138 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0470751255409 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 13.0946893788 58% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 50.2224549098 148% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.3001002004 57% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.92 12.4159519038 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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