Your company changed to a new uniform. While you like it, there is still something that could be improved about it. Write to your company manager and say
– Why do you like the new uniform?
– What could be improved about it?
– Suggest a way how it can be done
Dear Mrs. Smith,
My name is Dorothy Perkins. I work as a chief cashier in Lidl supermarket. I’m writing to you to suggest some improvements regarding the new uniform.
First of all, I would like to express my gratitude to you for providing such comfortable and beautiful outfit. I was pleased to learn that it’s made of 100% cotton, it feels good and there it cause no static electricity as the synthatic uniform did in the past. Besides, the dark green color masks possible spots on the clothes therefore we do not need to clean it every day.
Nevertheless, I would like to suggest some upgrading. As the matter of fact, the female staff only have skirts as a part of uniform. To have trousers as additional piece of uniform would be practical, because apart from working at checkout, cashiers place goods on shelves. And it’s not convenient to do this work having a skirt on.
Therefore, I would be much obliged if you could supply us with pants of the matching material and color for all the females members of the team. I believe this would contribute into work efficiency and we still would look neatly and according to the corporate style.
I hope to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Dorothy Perkins.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 197, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'causes'?
Suggestion: causes
...100% cotton, it feels good and there it cause no static electricity as the synthatic ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, if, look, nevertheless, regarding, so, still, therefore, apart from, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1027.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 214.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79906542056 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63932663182 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64953271028 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 311.4 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2005899667 44.8134815571 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.3571428571 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2857142857 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.28571428571 4.34317383033 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196472020894 0.216113520407 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0601790091107 0.0766984524023 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0704785137783 0.0603063233224 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100703434743 0.12726935374 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0443078927252 0.0580467560999 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.