Write a letter to your manager about a party that you want to organize at the office. In your letter say
– Why do you want to do it?
– When and where will it take place?
– What arrangements will you have to make?
Dear mr. Smith,
I’m writing to you to make a proposal regarding upcoming Christmas celebration .
I ‘m willing to take the duty of organizing the event. I have some spare time left as I already finalized or the annual reports ans statistic analyses. Besides I have an experience in holding parties and weddings for my relatives and friends in the past.
Twenty-fourth December is the last working day before the holidays, therefore, I believe it would be the best to have a Christmas party on that evening. When it comes to a place, I know a restaurant which is located nearby the office. They offer italian cuisine and live music. This cozy and spacious place would be a perfect venue for the celebration.
First of all, I need to calculate the budget of the event to ensure the company can afford it. Then I will book the restaurant and send invitations to the colleagues. Also I will purchase small christmas gifts and decorations.
Please, let me know if you approve my suggestions.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Anne Roberts, specialist of HR department.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 84, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...regarding upcoming Christmas celebration . I 'm willing to take the duty of ...
^^
Line 3, column 125, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'reports'' or 'report's'?
Suggestion: reports'; report's
...ft as I already finalized or the annual reports ans statistic analyses. Besides I have ...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 157, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Besides,
... annual reports ans statistic analyses. Besides I have an experience in holding parties...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 167, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...and send invitations to the colleagues. Also I will purchase small christmas gifts ...
^^^^
Line 5, column 209, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...so I will purchase small christmas gifts and decorations. Please, let me know i...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, if, look, regarding, so, then, therefore, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 921.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 186.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95161290323 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85526445404 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.704301075269 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 285.3 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.78183779 44.8134815571 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.7857142857 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.2857142857 16.8248392259 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 4.34317383033 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212338471579 0.216113520407 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0580317317299 0.0766984524023 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0454757604004 0.0603063233224 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0817096334084 0.12726935374 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0421781482352 0.0580467560999 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.54 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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