Some people prefer hobbies that require technology, while some people hobbies does not require technology.
Discuss the both views and give your opinion.
Hobbies play a pivotal role in shaping a human personality. In the era of globalization, a constant effort is being laid not only on academic education but also on developing hobbies which help children in their endeavour to achieve success in professional front. While some people prefer hobbies that are related to technology there are some who choose to have hobbies which are unrelated to technology. I will elucidate both sides in the below paragraphs and put forward my opinion.
First and foremost since we live in an age of digitization and technology has played a pivotal role in laying its foundation. Since then the majority of people have become dependent on it. This interdependency has brought a plethora of changes in human behaviour and thus some people tend to have hobbies which are related to technology. Hence over the last decade, it is common to see in different age groups who are being influenced by various technology gadgets like television, Playstations, Mobile phones and the most preponderant one being the internet. In a recent survey done by the Economic Times in India, it was seen that around eighty percent of the people want to have hobbies related technology like the internet as they believe that it helps them at their professional career in the longer run.
On the other hand, we see people who are exactly opposite and want to have hobbies like swimming, hiking, reading books in which technology doesn't have a role to play perhaps because the interests of some humans are vivid and they want to have a minimum intervention of technology in their lives. In my own personal experience at my school, many kids used to choose sports as their hobby as they found myriad of reasons to avoid hobbies related to technology as they felt disinterested.
Thus, in my view, I would conclude by saying that different people have different hobbies and it really depends on their likes and dislikes and what goals they want to achieve on the personal and professional front.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, really, so, then, thus, while, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1675.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94100294985 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76630430393 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516224188791 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 540.9 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.8154058791 49.4020404114 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.583333333 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.25 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.41666666667 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24383291309 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106110986064 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115042494092 0.0667982634062 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166777637856 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0832306196483 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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