You have recently attended a work-related course. Write a letter to your manager and say
– What course was it, and when did you take it?
– What did you like about it?
– What improvements can be made in the future?
I am writing this letter to inform you about a seminar which I have attended last week.
I was in Pune last week, where I had meeting with one of our clients. After attending meeting, when I was about to come there, I got a call from Catia software Limited and they told me to attend the course which encapsulates the advance knowledge of designer software.
I would like to share some good things about the work-related course. Firstly, it enhanced my professional knowledge which we could implement in our work-culture. Secondly, they also gave in-depth information about how to design efficiently.
There are several improvements which We should consider to implement in our organisation. first and foremost, we should utilize latest technology to increase our efficacy. Secondly, employees should be trained at regular interval of time about modern inventions.
I hope you will be pleased after reading this letter and reply me at your earliest convenience.
Yours faithfully,
Mohit Ratnu
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 48, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[3]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'consider implementing'.
Suggestion: consider implementing
...re several improvements which We should consider to implement in our organisation. first and foremost...
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Line 7, column 91, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: First
...sider to implement in our organisation. first and foremost, we should utilize latest ...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 121, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'utilize the latest'.
Suggestion: utilize the latest
...nisation. first and foremost, we should utilize latest technology to increase our efficacy. Se...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rliest convenience. Yours faithfully, Mohit Ratnu
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, second, secondly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 849.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 161.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27329192547 4.54256449028 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9287542015 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.695652173913 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4707681233 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.1818181818 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6363636364 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.81818181818 4.34317383033 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200763566174 0.216113520407 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0693764646105 0.0766984524023 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0629501178808 0.0603063233224 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113818623971 0.12726935374 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0562131725024 0.0580467560999 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 7.45979381443 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.69 8.71597938144 146% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 7.59969072165 118% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.