The graph below shows the population change between 1940 and 2000 in thrèe different countries in the U.S state of oregon.
The line graph gives information on the number of American citizens throughout 60-year period from 1940 to 2000 in 3 different states of the Oregon.
Overall, it can be clearly seen that washington always had the highest population over the given period. Furthermore, all three counties were similar in terms of experiencing upward trends.
In the year 1940, exactly 75 thousand people were living in washington, which doubled the figures for yamhill and columbia. In the next 30 years, 3 states had witnessed steady increases in the numbers of inhabitants. while there were about 125 thousand of those who settle down in washington, those of the 2 other states were around 40 thousand.
In 2000, washington population underwent a significant rise to more than 240 thousand people while the figures for columbia and yamhill were much less, which increased to only 90 adn 75 thousand respectively.
- The bar chart below shows the percentage of people living alone in 5 diffirents age groups in the USA between 1850 and 2000 73
- The graph below shows the population change between 1940 and 2000 in thrèe different countries in the U.S state of oregon. 56
- Some people say that economic growth is the only way to end hunger and poverty, while others say that economic growth is damaging the environment so it should be stopped. Discuss both views and give your opinion 61
- The graphs below show the types of music albums purchased by people in Britain according to sex and age. 78
- The graph shows information about international conferences in three capital cities in 1980 – 2010 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 218, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: While
...ncreases in the numbers of inhabitants. while there were about 125 thousand of those ...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 760.0 965.302439024 79% => OK
No of words: 146.0 196.424390244 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20547945205 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.47606760199 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7965007757 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.678082191781 0.547539520022 124% => OK
syllable_count: 217.8 283.868780488 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.953137727 43.030603864 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.571428571 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8571428571 22.9334400587 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.14285714286 5.23603664747 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142981396952 0.215688989381 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0665363400727 0.103423049105 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0789705513275 0.0843802449381 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0997579548988 0.15604864568 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0907855319404 0.0819641961636 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.2329268293 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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