Write a letter to a friend to ask for his/her help to collect money for a charity organization. The letter needs to cover the following details:
-Why do you want to collect money for the charity organization
-Ask for your friend to help
-Explain in detail how your friend can help
Dear Alan,
I hope this letter finds you well. As you might be aware, about the tragic incident, that recently took place in Pakistan. Our organisation has planned to take up the matter in our own hands.Therefore, in order to provide facilities to the affectees and refugees, we need funds.
Let me explain you in detail. We are currently working on a plan to accommodate different families.However, government and other organisations have already contributed to certain level, but there is still shortage of money. Moreover, other than funds, tents and shelters are required to set-up camps for children and families. Further, we will be requiring blankets, sheets and food items, in order to cater the basic needs of people. Moreover, we have also started a marathon transmission to collect funds from different sources. However, we will be sending you details of our account numbers, so that you can collect money from different people at your end and get it deposited in our account.
Therefore, it is requested to arrange for the funds accordingly and get them transferred to the accounts, so that we can continue our work and help needy people.
Yours Sincerely
Mitchell
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Alan, I hope this letter finds you well. As yo...
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Line 2, column 192, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Therefore
... to take up the matter in our own hands.Therefore, in order to provide facilities to the ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 280, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... affectees and refugees, we need funds. Let me explain you in detail. We are cur...
^^^
Line 3, column 100, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: However
... plan to accommodate different families.However, government and other organisations hav...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 566, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[4]
Message: The pronoun 'you' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'detail'
Suggestion: detail
...ources. However, we will be sending you details of our account numbers, so that you can...
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Line 5, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...and help needy people. Yours Sincerely Mitchell
^^^
Line 6, column 9, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...edy people. Yours Sincerely Mitchell
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, however, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 991.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 194.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10824742268 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94326285929 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.670103092784 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 300.6 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.4960382213 44.8134815571 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0909090909 76.5299724578 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6363636364 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.63636363636 4.34317383033 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154488960388 0.216113520407 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0569238124645 0.0766984524023 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0345974675523 0.0603063233224 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0955335836673 0.12726935374 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0311174953294 0.0580467560999 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 8.37731958763 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 8.71597938144 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 7.59969072165 118% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.