Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Technology has made children less creative than they were in the past
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Using technology changes human life, especially human is able to do more sophisticated work than past. How to utilize the technology depends on the people who use it wisely rather than do some unworthy work. From my point of view, many people use technology in proper avenues owing to illustrate them in the following reasons.
One of the most sensational technology in human life is computer technology. By harnessing the computer in the proper way, people are able to design many practical things. Take me as an example, I am an electrical engineer, and my major is forced me to design the complicated electrical board, which is very difficult to analyze the whole without the powerful computer. The computer aims me to pace the design process and helps me to find the problems in design and make the cheapest design without needing to make more boards. As a result, the computer is a type of technology that helps people to have convenience their lives.
Another issue is vital about the transmission technology. After investing in cars, airplanes, and trucks, people could travel easier to long distance in a short time, which helps them to facilitate many issues in their lives. One aspect of fast transportation is that people can buy many things from far places, helping them to trade and making creative merchant. Therefore, transportation technology helps people to benefit from it and use some practical things in their life.
The last reason is that some children can use the computer to play some puzzle games. I think they have more benefits from this practical issue in the computer that helps them to become more creative than before and think more sophisticated than earlier.
In sum, a technology that helps people to become more creative than the past. How to use technology depends on the people harnessing it and change them to be more creative. People could become more creative if they try to utilize technology in the proper way.
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- TPO-06 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 71
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- TPO-10 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Playing computer games is a waste of time. Children should not be allowed to play them.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 66
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, therefore, i think, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1635.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 330.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95454545455 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66406381236 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.457575757576 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 525.6 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.5216661747 48.9658058833 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.1764705882 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4117647059 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.29411764706 5.45110844103 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111614622579 0.236089414692 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0461928421744 0.076458572812 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0400311674434 0.0737576698707 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0772926383074 0.150856017488 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0456433430676 0.0645574589148 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 86.8835125448 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.