In some cultures people give more value to old people while in other cultures people give more value to young people. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
The importance given to youth or old people differs in each society. In some cultures younger people value more just because of their enthusiasm while others tends for experienced people. However, I believe that old people should be given more importance.
On one hand, firstly, the youth has can do attitude and they are full of energy. Once they start solving any issue, they’ll spend most of the time on it without even caring for meal or break. For instance, when I was working on a final year project during bachelor’s degree program, a hardware failure occur and I stayed at university lab all night in troubleshooting while skipping dinner. Secondly, the young generation is full of ideas and up to date with the latest technology trends. So, while working for any organization, they can use that knowledge and works in the successfulness of the company. Therefore, because of these reasons, young people are prefer in every walk of life in various countries.
On the other hand, although because of aforementioned less crucial reasons, the older generation is wiser, skilled, experienced and have more knowledge as compared to youth. These are the attributes that are successfully explored by different societies and organizations which become the pillars for their development. For example, when I was working for a university, the management had decided to hire an experienced head of department. On the very first day, he had arranged a faculty meeting and very cleverly understand the traits of people and used them accordingly during the engineering council visits resulting in an accreditation of university with engineering council. Therefore, the companies can easily flourish by using old people, ultimately helping the country growth.
In conclusion, the young people can bring energy and can do attitude to the culture, however, the old people are more experienced and skilled that can be used to flourish the nation. Therefore, I believe that old people should be given more importance in any culture or society than younger generation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1744.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25301204819 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96992228518 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55421686747 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 553.5 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.2387552757 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.0 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.75 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237046165987 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0835256698858 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0956068027102 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183112750784 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.131009404016 0.056905535591 230% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.