Topic: Some people say that too much attention and too many resources are given in the protection of wild animals and birds. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
The number of nearly extinct and extinct wild animals and birds are increasing significantly. Although wild animal preservation receives a great concern of social media, there are still not enough attention and resources given to keep them from extinction.
Specifically, citizens are lack of awareness of wild animal and bird protection. First of all, a huge number of people do not know that the wildlife is under a great threat due to human’s interference. They are unaware that if some species of the fauna became non-existent, their life on Earth would be affected considerably. Consequently, overhunting and animal trafficking are still happening, even on an international scale. As a result, numerous wild animals and birds are in danger and the loss of biodiversity is at the alarming rate.
In addition to people’s unawareness, governments are overlooking the situation. There are not enough strict laws enacted. People who hunt animals or fell trees illegally after receiving a fine still be able to capture animals or log trees for their commercial purposes. Moreover, there are various underqualified government-run programs to protect wildlife. These innovations are not supported thoroughly; therefore, there are not enough fundings to carry on the projects or to attract attention from outsiders. As a result, the imbalance of our ecosystem is getting worse and worse over a short period of time.
From all the above-mentioned, hardly has wildlife preservation received enough attention and resources from human beings and authorities. If we do not take any steps right away, our environment, as well as our home, will be destroyed awfully by our own action.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 601, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...is getting worse and worse over a short period of time. From all the above-mentioned, hardly ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, if, look, moreover, so, still, therefore, well, in addition, as a result, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1425.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39772727273 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22123626306 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606060606061 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.1265517239 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.93333333333 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15873309482 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0478864138371 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0334331684912 0.0667982634062 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.095742258524 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0362669150888 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.74 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.