You have recently moved to a different house.
Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter
• Explain why you have moved
• Describe the new house
• Invite your friend to come and visit
Dear Mike,
How have you been?. It has been a long time since we last met. I am writing to inform you that I have recently changed my apartment.
To elucidate, the reason for my move to a new apartment was due to a plethora of reasons but the preponderant one being the lack of facilities like swimming pool, Gymnasium and recreational club moreover the earlier accommodation was located at the outskirts of the city which affected my commutation to the office.
Thus, I am staying now in a high-rise building located at the centre of the city. The new apartment consists of two bedrooms and each bedroom has high tainted glass windows which provide a panoramic view of the beautiful gardens outside. On the other hand, society is well equipped with all the modern facilities like swimming pool, Sauna, Security and a health club.
Why don't you come and plan a visit this weekend on Saturday?. I am inviting all our college friends for a house-warming party. I can promise you that it will be great fun and you will enjoy.
I look forward to seeing you soon.
warm wishes
Derick
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear Mike, How have you been?. It has been a long t...
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... affected my commutation to the office. Thus, I am staying now in a high-rise bu...
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...na, Security and a health club. Why dont you come and plan a visit this weekend ...
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...ll be great fun and you will enjoy. I look forward to seeing you soon. warm...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Warm
... I look forward to seeing you soon. warm wishes Derick
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...orward to seeing you soon. warm wishes Derick
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, moreover, so, thus, well, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 903.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 192.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.703125 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65409941536 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.661458333333 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 274.5 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.9017811093 44.8134815571 174% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.25 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 4.34317383033 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191924224767 0.216113520407 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0681764520363 0.0766984524023 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0635830165369 0.0603063233224 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101740792814 0.12726935374 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0760154108251 0.0580467560999 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.