The leaders or directors of organizations are often older people. But some people say that young people can also be a leader. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is sometimes suggested that instead of older people, an organization can also be led by the young. I basically agree with this opinion because I believe that although older people are often more experienced, allowing young people to be a leader comes with more benefits.
On the one hand, admittedly, it is undeniable that rich experience and knowledge are needed from a leader and that they can only be acquired through time. For example, the CFO of a multinational company such as Apple must be very familiar with how to lower the risk of a new operation to the minimal level or what product they should launch to cater the potential need of their customers. It is by no means possible that a candidate in his or her twenties has equipped themselves with such competency. This is the reason why it is extremely rare to find people under 40 playing the leading roles of an organization.
However, on the other hand, I believe that there are obvious benefits for having young individuals serving at important positions of an organization. Firstly, people who are young may bring innovation to their work. Being willing to be exposed in a wide range of information sources, they are more likely to come up with better solutions to problems such as how to better communicate with their customers so that their product such as mobile phones and laptops can become more competitive in the market. In addition, young leaders are usually less conservative compared with their older counterparts. This may help them achieve higher goals as sometimes all you need is a bold decision.
In conclusion, I admit that being experienced is one important trait for a leader and is usually found in older people, but the innovative thoughts and less conservative decisions from young leaders can bring an organization to a whole new level.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, may, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1527.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90996784566 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81379695314 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553054662379 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.6387462923 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.25 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9166666667 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297704612569 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109632498444 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.091325450753 0.0667982634062 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210903082954 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10742563125 0.056905535591 189% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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