Success is often measured by wealth and material possessions. Do you think wealth is the best measure of success? What makes a successful person?
Being success is a crucial goal that every person want to achieve. many people believe that being successful is to own big mansions, expensive cars and designer clothing. In my perspective, I strongly disagree with the assertion that wealth is a measure of success. It should be judged by behavior, ways of expressing thoughts and their manners towards others.
Money and assets is not the proper material that we based on to evaluate successfulness. If wealth represent the level of success, those who make money from illegal business will be more respected than many intellectual people. For instance, profession like teacher, researcher and scientist do not earn high-income, their most prized possession is their knowledge. However, they are the one that build the steady foundation for the future of humanity. To different people, success have different definition, nevertheless, it could never be judged by wealthiness.
"Never judge a book by its cover." Likewise, a success person is the one who is well-educated, thoughtful and respect other individual.success should be measure by knowledge and morality. Our value is based on our treatment towards others.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, likewise, nevertheless, so, well, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 41.998997996 40% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 959.0 1615.20841683 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 174.0 315.596192385 55% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51149425287 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 4.20363070211 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21198562133 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 176.041082164 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.689655172414 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 289.8 506.74238477 57% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.4801352872 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.9 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29166884999 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106752548934 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0938464784505 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19852854125 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0402468457495 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.38 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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