some people say young people should be encouraged to leave their family when they become adults while some argue they should live for a longer time with their family. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
when youth turn into adulthood, some part of public advice to either stay away from their family. Yet other set of people oppose with former statement and support to reside long-term with their household. In my opinion, I consider that living apart from parents helps to attain a good position in life.
On the one hand, some people place an argument that living with parents for a long period will allow to keep them under control. Firstly, parents can relentlessly monitor them and support whenever they are involved in problems. this in turn helps them to maintain a good relationship with parents. Secondly, the possibility of indulging in bad activities are less, apparently reduces health related issues in future. For instance, one of my friend who lives in abroad has become a drug addict with his roommate and been jailed for 15 days. As a result, this creates a major threat to his future.
On the other hand, youngsters ought to be boosted to reside away from their parenthood when they become mature to hold the responsibilities and take decisions on their own, and I agree. this enables them to manage their own life without the guidance of the parents. Also, it brings plethora of benefits to them by handling crisis situation in day to day life. In addition, they are able to decide which job they want to choose which undeniably adds colors to their future. To illustrate, a recent survey show cases that 60% of youth who left their family has got a better future.
To recapitulate, though living with the family has got lot of benefits but still youngsters stay far away from their families have achieved a lot in life and helped them to reach greater heights and embraced victory.
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- Some people say that the government should not put money on building theatres and sports stadiums. They should spend more money on medical care and education. Do you agree or disagree? 67
- The advantages of spread of english as a global language outweigh its disadvantages .Do you agree or disagree ??? 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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when youth turn into adulthood, some part of...
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Suggestion: keeping
...th parents for a long period will allow to keep them under control. Firstly, parents ca...
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...whenever they are involved in problems. this in turn helps them to maintain a good r...
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Suggestion: in the future
...pparently reduces health related issues in future. For instance, one of my friend who liv...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, apart from, for instance, in addition, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1418.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8231292517 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48961933874 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574829931973 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.8354392749 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5333333333 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252529584738 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.074732701794 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0539327949591 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146541436436 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.037595160052 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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