Some people think that children should be home schooled when they are very young while others think it is better for them to attend a kindergarten. Which do you think is better? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
home schooled is first teaching place for children. I strongly support to that schooled at home is great place instead of kindergarten. In below paragraphs I have elaborate the facts with examples.
To begin with, a child learnt first speak with her mother. In my opinion, children have more curiosity while they in younger age. I believe that mother always be first counsellor for children. Moreover, they analysis the activities of their parents and grandparents. For Instance, it is a universal truth that children try to do similar things which they see surroundings. As every grandparents tells lot of stories to them and it create great impact on their imagination and thoughts. therefore, children get influence with their role model and it helps to develop their mind.
Secondly, they always involve with facts, though it is a very small age but at this age, they have very sharp memory. In very young age, they are not mature to take decision and manage their self and they want to try to do all things as elder people do whether it’s good for them or not . In addition, I would say safety is also a major concern for children. Such as we ought to tell them about safety issues also ensure them do not go anywhere unless your parents allow. therefore, we should stay children at premises rather than kindergarten. In other words, I would say that we always monitor our child and there are all family member available if they observe that they are doing wrong, we instruct them how to do those things.
In conclusion, after careful consideration I think we should keep children at home schooled. Some people think that kindergarten is better for children but according to facts , its proved that children is more safe and can be healthy at home.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 24.0651302605 204% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1467.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84158415842 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58878153606 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574257425743 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.5489907956 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.5 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8333333333 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.77777777778 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324399006543 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0932825657016 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.072441999192 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192070444438 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0766797608337 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.