Computer has been widely used in the modern society. How important is it to our life?
Computer is certain something which is widely used in today’s world. Hardly does a day go by without the subject of computer being raised in most people’s lives. It has been recognized to be of the greatest importance for present human. We could see computer existing ubiquitously in almost areas of life from business to medical science.
To begin with, it is undeniable that, computer has now become a crucial part of commercial world. By computer with internet network, we can apply the business transactions immediately and accurately; besides, all information or data will be kept in the hardcore as well so people can check in details. This is clearly illustrated by the fact that, computers are easily found in every shop, restaurant, supermarket, especially in stock market. With special software, people can take computer as a tool which is able to calculate huge parameters in just few seconds. Then, many online shops have rapidly appeared which are simply found on Internet, being a significantly effective assistant to support our lives.
Equally important, computer no doubt contributes an enormous benefit to the nowadays modern medical science. Complicated machines with computer control allow doctor to see inside of the patients; therefore, not only small but also dangerous diseases can be easily diagnosed perfectly. As a result, doctors will have favorable opportunities to figure out the measure to cure. In addition, especially in surgery, computer plays tremendously vital role. It could replace human in surgeries which needs the detailed accuracy.
On the whole, it is not exaggerating to say that we can not imagine how our society is without computer’s existence. Computer is considered as an advancing technology pushing human being to discover the world and keep forward to revolution.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Equally,
...tive assistant to support our lives. Equally important, computer no doubt contribute...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, second, so, then, therefore, well, in addition, no doubt, as a result, on the whole, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1554.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39583333333 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00536428843 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645833333333 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.7380933093 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.125 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.625 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222884826734 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0662941244659 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0514146644233 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131808747968 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0585662136783 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.74 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.