Write a Letter to your friend who also happens to live in that country
tell him/her why you chose this country
describe your new place of residence
propose a meeting with your friend
begin your letter with dear
Dear Grace,
Hi, how are you doing there? I hope you are doing fine. i did not know that you have already arrived here at Winnipeg last March.
Well this province here in Canada is very cold but there a lot of opportunities in my career as well as being a multicultural province. Also the people here are jolly and they have equal treatment when it comes to job opportunities.
The place I am living right now is quite big. It has a garden upfront, 2 bedrooms, and a garage. The neighborhood which, I am currently living in is quite fun because most of the citizen here are open minded. It is winter right now so I am shoveling off the snow on our pathway 6 times a day so that we can walk through it going to our job. Living here in Winnipeg is not boring as some people said, you can visit the museum nearby.
If it is OK with you grace, would like to go out with me? and visit some interesting areas here in the city center.
You can reach me via text or give me a call at my number 09361234567 or email me at bill123@mail.com. So that you can tell me when would you be available.
I look forward seeing you.
Best Wishes,
Bill
- Your friend has moved to another country. He or she is coming back to your country for a visit. You have arranged a party for him/her 73
- You have a friend living in another country and he/she is curious to learn about your countryexplain the major events that has occurred in your countrygive your opinion about the events that you mentionask your friend about the current events that are hap 67
- Some people believe that playing sports with a team is great way to prepare children for future work. Discuss both views and give your opinion 67
- Young single people often leave their parents to live alone for study or work. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this? 56
- You are writing your first letter to a pen pal.Describe your previous studies and work experience, your current activities, hobbies and interests.Tell your pen pal that you will be visiting him/her.Start your letter with dear.. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 57, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: I
...doing there? I hope you are doing fine. i did not know that you have already arri...
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Line 3, column 57, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...doing there? I hope you are doing fine. i did not know that you have already arri...
^
Line 5, column 137, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...well as being a multicultural province. Also the people here are jolly and they hav...
^^^^
Line 5, column 152, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... multicultural province. Also the people here are jolly and they have equal treat...
^^
Line 9, column 59, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: And
...ou grace, would like to go out with me? and visit some interesting areas here in th...
^^^
Line 10, column 102, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[3]
Message: “So that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...234567 or email me at bill123@mail.com. So that you can tell me when would you be avail...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 936.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 220.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.25454545455 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50216435237 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613636363636 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 288.0 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.0173026995 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 58.5 76.5299724578 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.75 16.8248392259 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5625 4.34317383033 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0928189684648 0.216113520407 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0336203460387 0.0766984524023 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0324200541041 0.0603063233224 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0487267441681 0.12726935374 38% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0224266030847 0.0580467560999 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.5 8.37731958763 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.78 8.71597938144 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.36 7.59969072165 84% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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