The position of women has changed a great deal in many societies over the past 50 years.But these societies cannot claim to have achieved gender equality.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Many countries across the globe have witnessed a remarkable alteration to the status of women in society over the past five decades;literacy and changes in the patriarchal family system are some of the milestones that helped to attain this.It is an irrefutable fact that few ethnic groups cannot vouch to have eliminated gender bias completely. I am inclined towards this view to a certain extent;however,it cannot be disregarded that many societies have been successful in getting rid of this injustice to women.
Out of all the reasons,the foremost one is women today are walking hand in hand with their male counterparts in any significant field that can be named which can be attributed to the up surging literacy levels especially in the cities.Due to this,they have managed to attain substantial success in their careers that was unimaginable a few years ago as women were earlier thought to be home-makers only and not torch bearers.To elaborate,this enhancement has led to women playing dual roles of being a homemaker and bread-winner which has made the male gender become a part of managing the household chores as well as upbringing of children to ease of the burden from women.Also,certain restrictions that were placed in terms of clothing,educational qualifications are no longer applicable as women have stepped out of their homes and have become independent decision makers.So,one can say that societies that considered certain tasks to be predominantly female are now accepting this modification to the roles played by both the genders specially in the urban areas.
However,the other side cannot be overlooked as the rural areas are yet far from these developmental changes.To commence with, the mindset of these people is the predominant obstacle in achievement of similarity between men and women.Men yet believe that women are weaker and sub-ordinate to them and hence consider it their right to have superiority.An ideal example of this is that in many parts of India female infanticide,widow-remarriage,dowry killings are prevalent as the masculine gender consider it their right to impose their power to subdue the feminine gender.Hence,orthodox mentality prevailing in certain parts of the world prohibit the gender bias omission from the society.
To culminate the above mentioned arguments, it can be said that despite of the advancements in social backgrounds and status of women in society there are a few sections that are yet unable to accept that women should share an equivalent position as men.It can be envisaged that a few more years down the line this notion will be wholeheartedly accepted by the masses,gender inequality shall be eradicated totally.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, look, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 13.1623246493 213% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 67.0 41.998997996 160% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2274.0 1615.20841683 141% => OK
No of words: 426.0 315.596192385 135% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33802816901 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54310108192 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.5683561787 2.80592935109 127% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 176.041082164 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556338028169 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 739.8 506.74238477 146% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 85.0 20.2975951904 419% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 313.406190111 49.4020404114 634% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 454.8 106.682146367 426% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 85.2 20.7667163134 410% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 11.4 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 5.01903807615 478% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199277680199 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126132561831 0.084324248473 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0467496523058 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127808135425 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0641083611935 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 46.3 13.0946893788 354% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -23.26 50.2224549098 -46% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 19.3 7.44779559118 259% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 37.6 11.3001002004 333% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.88 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.67 8.58950901804 148% => OK
difficult_words: 130.0 78.4519038076 166% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 36.0 10.1190380762 356% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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