TPO 25-Independent TOEFL Writing
The rapid development of technology makes the most of the people, especially young people, busier. Some old people believe that although young people have enough time to helping their communities, most of them do not really tend to be helpful. In my opinion, in contrast, young people have more important things to do for themselves rather than helping their communities. I believe that the more important works, the harder works and educations and their sense of ambition rather than the past lead to this.
First of all, educations and jobs are more difficult than the past. Educations and cutting edge technologies that need hardworking research and experiment takes a lot of time of the educated young people. For example, I spend about thirteen hours in the laboratory as an integrated circuit designer in the field of bioelectronics. Therefore, there is not enough extra time for me and my coworkers to help our society.
Secondly, there are more works and duties for young people compare to the past. Most of the young people have to simultaneously study and work altogether. They also have other responsibilities which take them a lot of time. These volumes of duties are not good for their buddies, so the should recover their health by doing exercise. For instance, some of my friends go to the gym after their works and universities. In my opinion, these kind of activities were not likely at the time when the older people were young, consequently, the had more time to be helpful.
Finally, the sense of ambition is one of the most essential reasons that young people do not have enough extra time. I said this because most of the young people want to reach their goals. The goals of nowadays young people are unbelievably bigger that people in the past. For me, I do not want the future like my mother. It is exactly true for all of my friends. This sense of young people like me persuades us to work more and harder, which results in less enough time to help our communities these days.
In conclusion, While most of the older people think that young people nowadays do not pay attention to their communities I think this claim is not fair. I believe that they do not have enough time for their societies due to their more important works, their harder works and educations and their sense of ambition.
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- TPO 25-Independent TOEFL Writing 3
- TPO-25 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Young people nowadays do not give enough time to helping their communities.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 63
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Young people nowadays do not give enough time to helping their communities.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 63
- practice 3
- TPO 25-Integrated TOEFL Writing 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 432, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
... works and universities. In my opinion, these kind of activities were not likely at the ti...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, finally, first, if, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in contrast, kind of, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1920.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 402.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77611940299 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61078391839 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.435323383085 0.524837075471 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 592.2 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.2428411346 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.2727272727 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2727272727 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.54545454545 5.45110844103 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.236089414692 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.076458572812 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.150856017488 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.12 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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