Now a days in some country the number of children aged 15 and younger are increasing.What are yhe current and future effects of ever increasing population.
A prominent sentiment is that older people have a good physics and happy in they life as compare to young people.There are many causes why youth have mental stress and unfit their body. In my opinion some stringent counter measures should be initiated to alleviate this hassle.
The first and predominant reasons is that young people are too busy in their professional life due to this reason they do not have enough time to do physical activity like yoga, walking, swimming which is help to stay fit their body. One more convincing point is that more and more people prefer heavy diet such as a burger,pizza and soft drinks in their daily meals which increase the body weight. Moreover, young people have responsibility to full fill the need of their family and they are pressurized to complete their work on time by employers as result they mental stress.As a result they are happy from outer body but not happy by their heart.
However, there are few solutions for young generation to stay fit and happy.firstly, government and company organise some activities which help them to stay fit.secondly, youth give more priority to healthy food as compare to fast food in term of physics.finally , hangout with friend and vacation is the best way to recharge the body cell.for an example,a recent survey showed that who have more social circle and enjoying frequently in holiday which leads the chance of happiness.
In conclusion, modern lifestyle and busy in their work main factor for people to stay unhealthy or unhappy but few solutions are available to tackle this problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1316.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94736842105 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6324606217 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578947368421 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 20.2975951904 187% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 116.149446308 49.4020404114 235% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 188.0 106.682146367 176% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.0 20.7667163134 183% => OK
Discourse Markers: 19.1428571429 7.06120827912 271% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0176436143717 0.244688304435 7% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0104354117017 0.084324248473 12% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0133469193794 0.0667982634062 20% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0109497400723 0.151304729494 7% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00724941097722 0.056905535591 13% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.9 13.0946893788 160% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.37 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.1190380762 170% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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