Some people believe the aim of university education is to help graduates get better jobs. Others believe there are much wider benefits of university education for both individuals and society.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
These days, it seems that higher education are becoming more and more absolutely consequential in modern life. While some people strongly opinionated that attending universities provides graduates with a good degree to find highly-paying occupations, others would argue that not only do individuals gain benefits from receiving tertiary education but it also has many positive impacts upon civilization. In this essay, I intend to discuss how beneficial it is.
One point which I believe to be extremely pivotal aim is the fact that the better degree students own after graduation, the more career opportunities they will have during the interview. Given the fact that undergraduates are capable of acquiring their major's knowledge in-depth, and companies have selected the most talented interviewers applying for jobs, I believe entering colleges plays a crucial role for a better life.
Despite the major purpose of university of education, formal education has positively affected to both society and people. With regard to the young, they can improve their independent skills by studying from school. Because they will manage their budget themselves and create their own time arrangement logically, they gradually develop a habit of independence. In respect to community, their extraordinary achievement in development of national economy is irrefutable, specifically, they come up with many solutions to overcome a country's financial challenges, which push economy forward.
Personally, academic education at universities has increasing become vital in our nation's prosperity and their stable living conditions.
By way of conclusion, how greater their national economics will be in the future or whether the youngsters can increasingly hone their skills and better their life or not depends on their decision to enter colleges.
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- Some people think it is not necessary for adults to receive education in class Self study is a good way for them to study more effectively To what extent do you agree or disagree 93
- Some people believe the aim of university education is to help graduates get better jobs. Others believe there are much wider benefits of university education for both individuals and society.Discuss both views and give your opinion. 84
- Some people think young people should go to university to further their education while others think they should be ecouraged to take vacational training to serve the society. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 89
- In some countries, teenagers have jobs while they are still students. Do you think it is a good idea. Support your opinion by using specific reasons and details. 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, while, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1565.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.69090909091 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08083921163 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.669090909091 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.4296103324 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.272727273 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.63636363636 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190817123396 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0667073846033 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0649783965219 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0950119543813 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0588125496544 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 50.2224549098 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.02 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.68 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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