Write a letter to the environment officer in your area complaining about the garbage problem in your neighbourhood and say
- What is causing the problem?
- Why is it bothering you?
- Suggest a solution to rectify the problem.
Dear Sir, this letter is in regards to bring the garbage problem of our area to your kind notice. I stay in St. Cavender's Street, California which comes under your jurisdiction. this has become a predicament for us.We have never faced such a situation
before this. it is been two weeks since municipality workers have not
come to pick the waste from our society and it is just accumulating. However,
it has become egregious and is unavoidable now. The waste is coming out of the
bins and is littering the corner of the road. As you are aware that this is a rainy
season and this is going to create a havoc for residents. Also whenever, the wind blows, the foul smell is not bearable at all.
There are plethora of measures that can be taken to eradicate this persistent catastrophe. I would
suggest that corporation should arrange a session to educate the people and
should implicate a law against this menace which are threat to people's life. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Nisha Bhan
- You are going away to travel for the summer.A friend will be looking after your house while you are away. Write a letter to your friend.Say where you are goingDescribe your houseExplain some of the things your friend must do to look after your house\ 78
- You hired a car from a company and while you were driving on holiday, you had a small accident. You will have to write a report to the company to explain it.Write a letter to the company. In your letter, you need to explain the following:•when and where 78
- you were on a pleasant trip and had rented a flat from your friend who was on a holiday. Write a letter to your friend and in your letter writ him:>how you felt about the trip and>how did you take care of his house in his absence. 73
- You are a student at an English language school in Brighton and are living in private accommodation with other flat mates. You have not had hot water or heating for some time. The landlord’s workmen have tried to fix the problem but without success. Wr 56
- You recently took a part-time job working for a local company. After a few weeks, you realized there were some problems with the job.Write a letter to the manager of the company. In your letter:-- explain why you took the job-- describe the problems that 81
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 26, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
Dear Sir, this letter is in regards to bring the garbage problem of our area t...
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Line 1, column 179, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...ia which comes under your jurisdiction. this has become a predicament for us.We have...
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Line 1, column 216, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: We
...n. this has become a predicament for us.We have never faced such a situation befo...
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Line 2, column 14, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...er faced such a situation before this. it is been two weeks since municipality wo...
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Line 6, column 59, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
... going to create a havoc for residents. Also whenever, the wind blows, the foul smel...
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Line 9, column 114, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...fe. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, ...
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Line 9, column 273, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Yours faithfully, Nisha Bhan
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.48453608247 187% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 849.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74301675978 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59529527547 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.664804469274 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3124938545 44.8134815571 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.75 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9166666667 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.25 4.34317383033 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.29896907216 209% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119336802713 0.216113520407 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0424865789066 0.0766984524023 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0721556761331 0.0603063233224 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0355111416187 0.12726935374 28% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0568802210939 0.0580467560999 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.62 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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