Some people thing that environmental problems should be solved on a global scale while others believe that it is better to deal with them at nationally. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Environmental problems are bigger problems and they does not belong to one region or other. It is assumed by many individuals that ecological hurdles must be treated at world level, whereas, others do not agree and have a notion that it should be restricted to national boundary only. In my opinion, the impact of environmental problems is always on the world level, therefore, the solution should come from the universal stage.
Firstly, the problems solved at a global level will have the same solution within all the regions of the world. Moreover, the side effects of such problems are mainly impacting every nation, hence the unity should be made to tackle such problems. For an illustration, the air pollution or global warming is not a problem for one nation or a particular region, the actions taken by some will result for the whole earth. I agree that the approach should be common so that everyone can have the benefit of the solution.
Secondly, solving such problems on a national level will breakdown the difficulty into smaller portions and some developed nations can raise the funds to support the elimination of hazard from the environment rapidly. In addition to that, loss of species is majorly a concern of a specific region, in which scientist of that country work on the problem with the use of technology to get an optimum solution. If the nation is unable to solve the problem, the global body such as, WHO can support in the matter.
In conclusion, ecological problems are a hazard for every individual of this world, people should always be together to handle such dangerous contamination. Which will benefit the world to have the same solution and the problem can be eradicated completely from the planet Although some environmental problems are limited to some regions only which can be confronted at a domestic level. Hence, the global level is more effective as it will eliminate the local levels as well.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 53, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'do'
Suggestion: do
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, whereas, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1614.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93577981651 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68443704459 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.51376146789 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.1843921642 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.153846154 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1538461538 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3846153846 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232161148742 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0933940220118 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0352415904923 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157485563681 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0336254900257 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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