It has recently been announced that a new restaurant may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
Due to industrial revulation, urban cities population has skyrocketed last centruy. Some people cook their food at home, others prefer to eat at a restaurant such as Burger King, Mc Donalds or Pizzahut. It would be amazing if a restaurant opens in my neighborhood. I have several reasons why.
First of all, restaurants, pubs, and other entertainment places works at citie's advantage. According to the recent research study which conducted at MIT University by the team of reputable scientist, restaurants change cities' face positively. The value of houses increase since restaurants attract people to move there. There is no need to say it is favour of you if you have a house there.
Secondly, approaching this issue, apart from what mentioned above, there is another subtle point. I am an engineering student in Istanbul University in Turkey. I work in a part time job tto afford my expenses while I study I have heavy schedule. If a restaurant open near my house, it would be amazing. I fed up to cook meal and wash the dishes. On the one hand I might eat tasty foods, on the other hand I can save my time to study.
Thirdly, the last reason is about job opportunities. As a mentioned above I have a part-time job and it is far away from my house but near my university. Especially, at the weekend It is hard to come to house because it's distance. Maybe, I can work at this restaurant.
To wrap it up, taking all aforementioned reasons into the account, one can conclude that reastaurants are not bad things. They can increase reputable of cities , create new opportunities to work and you can eat tasty food with your friends there.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 37, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'cities'' or 'city's'?
Suggestion: cities'; city's
Due to industrial revulation, urban cities population has skyrocketed last centruy...
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Line 5, column 173, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...anbul University in Turkey. I work in a part time job tto afford my expenses while I stud...
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Line 9, column 160, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...s. They can increase reputable of cities , create new opportunities to work and yo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, while, apart from, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1364.0 1977.66487455 69% => OK
No of words: 287.0 407.700716846 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75261324042 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8911499565 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609756097561 0.524837075471 116% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 618.680645161 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.0485104313 48.9658058833 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.2 100.406767564 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.35 20.6045352989 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9 5.45110844103 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105803031771 0.236089414692 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0324792375333 0.076458572812 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0350227600971 0.0737576698707 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0596316355364 0.150856017488 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0226127460756 0.0645574589148 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 11.7677419355 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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