tpo28
Education has undeniable part of every child’s life, which means that flourishing in this stage of life can bring more thrive in the future life for both child and his/her family. By considering this, there is controversial debate between people; whether by passing the time involving the parents in their children’s educational issues has been faded rather than past. Personally, I believe that although every time parents have strong ties with their kids both emotionally and financially, their involving in their children’s educational task is less than before.
First of all, it is crystal clear that life style has been changed since several decades ago. Parents are busier nowadays, than the past time. Every family’s demand has increased recently, so this causes a bunch of financial problems. In fact, for solving this financial problem not only both parents have to work, but also they have to be in workplace more than before to afford the extra cost of their life. Therefore, they have not enough time to pay attention to their children’s education. No matter how old their kid is, and no matter what emotional support their kid needs, they only spend large majority of their time to work, and when they arrive home they are too tired to have any energy, somehow they are not able to talk about their daily life with each other. For example, I have an uncle who has a son, because he and his wife have to be in their work place all the day, they took their son in the kindergarten when he was only four years old last year. And now, despite he is in the elementary school he learns to be independent, so without his parents he is able to do his homework.
Furthermore, educational system has been improved thanks to modern technology. In fact, in the light of both the state-of-the-art learning facilities and up to date educational system, learning process has improved rather than before, so there is no need that parent directly spend time to teach the materials to their juveniles. For example, my own young brother who is in the high school, mostly their school holds art and science exhibition to simulate their content of the materials for the students. In addition, they have the program during the semester which a sophisticated person in any field is attended to their school to give speech to them to broaden their knowledge in important issues of life, science and whatever they need in their life span. Because of this flourishing educational system, my parents are more likely be sure about my brother’s educational tasks. As a result, today’s educational systems provides an opportunity which there does not feel the lack of parent’s participation.
Finally, as we know, no thing and no one can neglect the striking role of parent on their children’s life, especially in their educational manner. I think, nothing even financial problem can be a compelling reason to decrease the parent’s role on the student’s learning process. Were we realistic enough, we would admit that students need their parent’s support either in financial or emotional issues under any situation.
To sum up, by considering all of the discussions mentioned above I state that parent’s involvement in their kid’s educational tasks has been decreased recently by comparing the past time. Actually, changing life style, improving of educational system and advent of modern equipment are the most important reasons for this.
- TPO 33 85
- Students are influenced more by their teachers than by their friends 60
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Parents today are more involved in their children's education than parents were in the past.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 73
- tpo 48 80
- tpo47 80
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 133, Rule ID: PAST_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'pastime'?
Suggestion: pastime
.... Parents are busier nowadays, than the past time. Every family's demand has increas...
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Message: Did you mean 'nothing'?
Suggestion: nothing
...s participation. Finally, as we know, no thing and no one can neglect the striking rol...
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Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to process'
Suggestion: to process
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Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
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Message: Did you mean 'pastime'?
Suggestion: pastime
...een decreased recently by comparing the past time. Actually, changing life style, improvi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, finally, first, furthermore, if, so, therefore, for example, i think, in addition, in fact, as a result, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 65.0 43.0788530466 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 84.0 52.1666666667 161% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2927.0 1977.66487455 148% => OK
No of words: 572.0 407.700716846 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11713286713 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.89045207381 4.48103885553 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93022587081 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 286.0 212.727598566 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 905.4 618.680645161 146% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.9071820722 48.9658058833 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.045454545 100.406767564 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.6045352989 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.77272727273 5.45110844103 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.236089414692 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.076458572812 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.150856017488 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 11.7677419355 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 58.1214874552 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 121.0 86.8835125448 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 10.002688172 155% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.247311828 156% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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