tobacco is an addictive substance, but people have been using it freely.Some people say tobacco products (such as cigarettes and smoking pipes) should be made illegal.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In recent years, the upsurge in the number of people who smoke regularly has sparked controversy over the potential impact of this trend on the whole society. To address people's smoking problem, some people are of the opinion that the trade and inhaling tobacco products should be banned by governments while others do not take the same position on this issue. Yet to the best of my knowledge, I completely reject this notion as one can see many pitfalls on exerting this limitation.
There can be little doubt that prohibiting the general public from smoking at large is not the most effective way for some reasons. Undoubtedly, by this action, officials will trigger the trafficking of tobacco products all around the country especially in frontiers, adding a heavy burden on the responsibility of the police officers. It is obvious this illegalization helps criminals to extend their profit margins. Dissatisfied from societal limitations, those smoking addicted individuals would not give their smoking habit up and continue inhaling the cigarette in their homes like other illegal drugs.
Another main justification is that a large number of people are working in companies that provide the general public with different types of the cigarette and smoking pipes and so forth. Undeniably, implementing restrictions on tobacco products will have detrimental effects on the economy of a country, increasing the number of unemployed people and spread poverty. It should be noted that the vast majority of governments, especially of those developed countries, have earned lump sum income by taxing smoking-related industries. Obviously, this banning will cause that governments lose their tax revenue and will face them with a tight budget.
In the light of these facts, one can conclude that at first sight maybe the illegalization of smoking decreases the consumption of the cigarette and other tobacco products, but over time it will have detrimental effects on the sense of freedom of the general public and the rate of crime. Also, this action will put the economy and the industry of a country at risk.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, so, while, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1775.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23598820059 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87225973787 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566371681416 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 557.1 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.0034963924 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.538461538 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0769230769 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.84615384615 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205748667649 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0713861834641 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0668679339763 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125653245207 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0429063366618 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.