An English speaking friend is coming to spend a week in your hometown. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
. offer to find a place to stay
. give suggestions abut what to do in a week.
. inform about the clothes to be brought.
Dear Sam,
Hope this letter finds you in the pink of your health. I was excited after hearing the news that you are visiting my hometown. Since I am native to this place thus based on my experience I can provide valuable ideas in making your stay memorable and comfortable.
As you are aware that Sydney is a bustling city so there are a plethora of lodging options depending on your budget. I know a lot of places which offers short-term rentals and the type of stay varies from shared rooms to hotel thus, based on your preference I can help you to find an appropriate place and book it in advance.
In addition to the above, there are myriads of tourist places which we can explore in a week's time. On the weekdays, we can travel to the city museum and the art galleries where you can explore the diversity of Australian culture and on the weekends, we can go to the zoo and the national park to discover the Australian outback. Apart from this, we can also go for sight-seeing and city tour. I am sure you will find this as an alluring experience.
As far as the weather is considered, Sydney is temperate and sunny all around the year so I would advise you to bring along only summer clothing.
Looking forward to your earliest response.
Cheers,
Ben
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...our stay memorable and comfortable. As you are aware that Sydney is a bustling...
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Line 4, column 270, Rule ID: HELP_TO_FIND[1]
Message: This phrase is probably grammatically incorrect. Write 'help you find' instead.
Suggestion: help you find
...sp;thus, based on your preference I can help you to find an appropriate place and book it in adv...
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Line 4, column 332, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...propriate place and book it in advance. In addition to the above, there are myri...
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Line 8, column 147, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ou to bring along only summer clothing. Looking forward to your earliest respons...
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Line 11, column 8, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ard to your earliest response. Cheers, Ben
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, so, thus, apart from, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1049.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 230.0 206.0 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56086956522 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59854910804 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573913043478 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 325.8 290.88556701 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.9880631229 44.8134815571 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.3636363636 76.5299724578 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9090909091 16.8248392259 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.09090909091 4.34317383033 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166915639932 0.216113520407 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0647395341188 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592293189904 0.0603063233224 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0973003722829 0.12726935374 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0664222133376 0.0580467560999 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.