In many countries more and more young people are leaving school but unable to find jobs. what problems do you think youth unemployment causes for individuals and the society?
What measures should be taken to reduce the level of unemployment among the youngsters.
Literate unemployment is the burning issue for many developing countries. Youths are graduating from universities but less likely to find a job which matches their skill set. Unemployment not only increases stress on individuals lives but also make them to take wrong path for earning, which eventually creates the problem for society. Governments should reduce the overuse of technologies, particularly in government sector jobs in order to feel the gap of unemployment. Other solution is to support start-ups by lending them subsidy or interest free loans.
Teenagers remain idle after completing his or her graduation, they in turn surrounded by negativity. As a result, they prone to choose illegible earning options, just to keep themselves busy and offend loneliness. If, this predicament continues more than couple of years then they obviously commit crime. As a result, society also suffers the adverse side of youth unemployment. For example, in late 90’s UK had endured the youth unemployment, which led their educated citizens to choose fraudulent way to earn money. After several years UK government had contemplated that society was also getting affected by malice activities.
To cope with this unpleasant condition many governments incubate committees. Some countries’ government restricts the technological intervention on certain jobs so that their youth would not sit idle. For example, the Chinese government has been constituting laws to prevent unemployment through confining use of technological advancements in agriculture as well as manufacturing sector. Secondly, many of the developed countries are availing comprehensive start-up schemes which could lure talented youth to open their own enterprise. In this case, the aim of the government is not only to support individuals to encourage its business but also creating more jobs via brilliant entrepreneurs.
To deduce, there are always challenges for youths and the governments about unemployment. But, if the government take necessary measures to support graduate adolescents then this issue might not deteriorate individuals life and bring peace to society. In turn, the government also reaps the benefits as a nation would step further economically in couple of decades.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, for example, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1931.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.67941176471 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19831676102 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623529411765 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 595.8 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.1136714282 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.631578947 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8947368421 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.47368421053 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148342211377 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.045132345179 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0345879509331 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0899659876341 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0381017005551 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.37 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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