In many countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility.
What are your opinions on this?
Nowadays, the engagement of children in paid jobs is faced a lot. While some people claim that it is wrong, others believe this to be relevant experience. To my point of view, children being involved in paid work is both beneficial and has disadvantages. This essay will accentuate both standpoints.
On the one hand, working may affect negatively. In poor conditions of black jobs children have a great risk of physical, psychological and other negative impacts on their development and health. A good example of young people working is India, where they are forced to earn because of many reasons like poverty or a lack of livelihood options. Moreover, since they are cheap and acquiescent to an employee's demands, they are employed. Certainly, this results in rise of children rights' harassment.
However, if children are engaged in doing some work, it helps them to develop themselves, as working makes people independent and more responsible. Furthermore, it leads to both interpersonal and social competence in children. That is why in many developed countries, it is acceptable and mandatory for children to contribute to some daily hours n some work. For example, in European nations, children are engaged in part-time jobs, where they earn sufficiently enough to fulfill their needs. In the meantime, they also increase their practical skills. Consequently, the evidence presented supports the idea of economic and social development of a person resulting from working.
To conclude, as nothing is perfect, children working at paid job has detrimental effects. Nevertheless, depending on which circumstances they work at and the category of work, it may bring relevant experience and benefit to them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1448.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34317343173 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03654838275 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605166051661 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.9444977766 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.1764705882 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9411764706 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32925653168 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100486806657 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0841761965609 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198304917625 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0713673260796 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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