Should old people live with the family or separately with same aged people?
Living with family members, separately or in old-age-home is a debatable topic. Although, scenario is fairly subjective and differ from family to family depending on the culture and suitability, I, however, believe that elders should live with their descendants.
Firstly, senior citizens need constant care and emotional support which is impossible to get in old-age-home. Although, decent centers are available, which promise to provide excellent healthcare, still this might not be feasible as these are expensive and one cannot completely rely on their services. Additionally, elders feel alone in those centers which leads to anxiety and depression. This has been supported by the survey performed by department of Social Sciences in University of New York, which says that 87% of people in these institutions face depression.
Secondly, parents and grandparents have a life time of experience which they use to guide their children in every phase of life. This not only help younger to tackle difficulties by taking appropriate steps but also assist them to live a prosperous life by making wise choices such as choosing a career path or selection of life partner. Also, parents help in the up-bringing of their grandchildren by moral support and valuable lessons. To illustrate, Asia Life Magazine has demonstrated the effect of presence of grandparents as positive in their recent article as people influenced by elders were found to have a better understanding of life.
In conclusion, I opine that combine family system not only help elders by availability of care from off-springs but also children by wise direction from experience.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'lifetime'?
Suggestion: lifetime
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Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1398.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41860465116 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03452481369 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612403100775 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7256809067 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.090909091 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4545454545 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.27272727273 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20680174154 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0799170289343 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120319355985 0.0667982634062 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129922803606 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.149349773987 0.056905535591 262% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.86 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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