More and more people are opting for ready-made food instead of freshly cooked food. Are there any advantages or disadvantages to this? Discuss both views and give your opinion.
The proliferations of pre-made arose a discussion on its pros and cons. In my opinion, freshly cooked food more is desirable for a good eating habit.
Timesaving and convenience seem to be the most tempting element for people to select read-to-made food. Nowadays, people are living in a busy life, they are engaged in different aspects, like working, taking care of children. They only thing they want is something fast and easy to get. The grab-and-go food shops which sell prepacked food, like sandwiches and frozen meal box, is now ubiquitous in the town demonstrated that people are hungering for a quick and hassle-free dining culture. It is widely accepted that if people spend less time preparing a meal and do the washing after the meal, they will have more free time to do what they keen on. In result, more and more people get used to eating fast food.
Although pre-made food gives us convenience, we should never neglect the drawbacks it brings. The primary concern of pre-packed food is its high sodium and fat content. Excessive salt and oil in the diet are two main factors contributing to serious health problems, such as cardiovascular disease, heart attack and obesity. A study conducted by the World Health Organization shows that people who consume ready-to-made food constantly for over six months are more susceptible to heart-related diseases and obesity. Apart from seasoning, adding of preservatives and additives to pre-made food is inevitable as it plays a significant role in the preservation and makes food more mouth-watering. However, wealthy data supported that these additives are responsible for Hyperactivity Disorder in children. All in all, prepacked meals cause detrimental effects on our health.
In sum, ready-made food brings us convenience, however, its disadvantages should not be ignored. We should adopt a healthy eating habit for the seek of better health.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, apart from, in fact, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1611.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23051948052 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98800625778 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616883116883 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.51025857 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.7647058824 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1176470588 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.82352941176 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34799246968 0.244688304435 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107429558321 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0932463771432 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214741694585 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0577153063718 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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