Many young people regularly change jobs over the years. What are the reasons for this ?
Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages ?
In recent times, youngsters prefer to switch jobs frequently as they want to explore new things or sometimes they get fed up with the same routine. However, this essay believes that job change brings more benefits to employees which outweigh the drawbacks of working at the same place for years.
On the one hand, I concede that gaining experience while working at the same organization for years can add many perks, incentives, and promising salary package. It could be argued that once you learned all the skills and tactics for that job, then it becomes monotonous for an individual to continue a career at the existing workplace. Therefore, a need arises to change the current company in order to achieve more success as well as promotion in a specific area.
However, although the upside of staying at current workplace is a real concern, some group of people advocates that job-switch should be done routinely, as it will boost cognitive ability of people and with the traveling, exploring new place people can experience various lifestyles of different traditions whereas doing job for same company for many years seems dull and uninteresting . To exemplify, nowadays youngster adore doing private jobs instead of the government, owing to in government jobs people get stuck in the same place for a long time, on the other hand in private jobs switching can be done multiple times. Lastly, it is clear that the reason responsible for the fluctuation of jobs is getting annoyed with the previous job and lack of opportunities.
To conclude, although I admit that staying in a current job is a wise decision, to learn distinct skills and improvement which people receive with more switching of jobs are invaluable. Therefore, I agree that the merits of replacing a job outweighs the disadvantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 386, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... many years seems dull and uninteresting . To exemplify, nowadays youngster adore ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, lastly, so, then, therefore, well, whereas, while, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1514.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0635451505 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79761803445 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565217391304 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.8999366286 49.4020404114 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.4 106.682146367 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.9 20.7667163134 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.3 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266299817712 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108046348332 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574945760234 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154073843863 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0465787122325 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.66 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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