Some people argue that it is more important to have an enjoyable job than to earn a lot of money. Others disagree and think that good salary leads to better life.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
While some people prefer enjoyable jobs, the others look for highly paid ones because according to them, what they choose can assure better life. In my opinion, finding the jobs that bring you joy is more important if you can afford the life.
People who prefer high salary job because it can help them to have high living standard. With high salary, people can buy fully equipped house and luxury cars. They have money to pay the school’s fees for their children and the health insurance for their family. However, in order to have highly paid job, people have to work very hard, even from early morning to midnight. As a result, they do not have time to take care of their kids, to take vacation with family members, and to go out with friends. From my point of view, it is not a life to live.
In contrast, people support enjoyable jobs because the matching job makes them satisfied and committed. Then, they can complete the challenging tasks and achieve high performance. In addition, with flexible or easier working time, people have more time for family, friends, and their own hobbies. Nonetheless, enjoyable jobs are not always available and require some significant competences. And if you have a big family and have to pay for the bills, enjoyable but low salary job is not sound.
In summary, extremely focusing on earning money brings you better life but you have to tradeoff with your time, your health, your relationship and emotions. Chasing with enjoyable jobs while you have bills to pay makes your life disastrous. Hence, I would like to choose a less well-paid job, but have more time for my own life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, look, nonetheless, so, then, well, while, in addition, in contrast, in summary, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1355.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78798586572 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35734336958 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533568904594 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.4808303306 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.6875 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6875 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.1875 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273287416241 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0990314251932 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0493912169422 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187658300568 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0391782439188 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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