Healthcare should always be funded by governments and it should always be free for people to use. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this idea?
In the new millennium, there is a widespread concern among patients in terms of paying the expenses of their drugs, doctors and other related expenditure. In such a context some people, unlike many others, aver that healthcare should be free of charge and the budget should be provided by the administrative system. Nevertheless, this claim is acceptable to some extent not comprehensively.
On the one hand, the advocates of the free healthcare system mention that if the healthcare expenses eliminated by the government the destitute citizens could treat their diseases without constantly worrying about the cost. This could contribute to raising living standard among impoverished people. In addition to this, some special diseases involving cardiovascular diseases, cancers, respiratory diseases and etc. need permanent usage of expensive drugs which could cost a fortune in the long run. Therefore, if these drugs are available freely it may lead to curing severe ailments appropriately without enforcing excessive financial pressure on the patients and their family.
On the other hand, it needs a huge investment to obviate the expenditure of hospital, drugs and other related sectors. First and foremost reason mentioning by the opponents appears to be that the fund should be allocated more appropriately to preventive programs. In addition, if the healthcare is free for all the people it may cause they do not take care of themselves appropriately. A case in point is seen in some developing countries for some contagious diseases which their drugs are available freely but people do not consume them appropriately to eradicate that specific disease.
To sum up, according to the aforementioned remarks it seems that also providing free healthcare regarding some special diseases is quite sensible policy it is imprudent that it will be always free for all the people irrespective of their financial condition.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 408, Rule ID: AND_ETC[1]
Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
...diseases, cancers, respiratory diseases and etc. need permanent usage of expensive drugs...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, nevertheless, regarding, so, therefore, in addition, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1628.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44481605351 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07690853566 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561872909699 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.0168344328 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.230769231 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.30769230769 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2610567509 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.081843876326 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0826205471078 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162196501977 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.058406134027 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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