Immigrating to a new country is hard Task because a person has to adopt a new culture. Some believe that immigrant can survive within his minority community. Discuss your view and who you support.
Individual who decide to migrate overseas has obvious charm. Whereas one should go through litmus test of adapting to a new culture. Although accepting new culture that doesn not necessarily mean to disown one's own culture. In following paragraph i intend to discuss both side of coins.
It is obvious one who came from strong and traditional background. Then it will be difficult for him to adopt occidental society. People from such a community try to live together in foreign countries and maintain thetradition. For instance, India is a Cosmopolitan country with strong devotional background. It is customary to cover our head and remove shoes before enter in Temple. Thus, ut will be myth that adopting new culture is a curse for someone Another important is how host country come to accept one until he connect to them. Indeed this is something happened all around the world.
On other hand, nowadays many low population country came with a policy to invite talented immigration like Canada New Zealand and many more take few. They do because they want to thick population expect from new comers to boost economy by fulfill shortage crisis of certain occupants. At the same time, it is good to except culture of occidental society. As it is attributed with too many benefits. For example, a new comer should go through many difficulties in foreign dwelling place in beginning. if individual can immerse himself into new and dynamic culture of new and land. Thus one can leave marvelous lifestyle.
In conclusion,mutual understanding and compromising is necessary between stranger and host country about culture and tradition. Moreover culture of immigrated land is like Foster mother for individual who decide to migrate. Surviving in minority community is not proper solution.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, then, thus, well, whereas, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1497.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16206896552 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85343317008 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631034482759 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.1498052455 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.2857142857 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8095238095 20.7667163134 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.28571428571 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212761880999 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0535651705758 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0418736397311 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122277168083 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.028231704518 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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