It is sometimes said that people should be encouraged to get married before they are 30, as this is best both for the individual and for society.
Do you agree or disagree?
It is a usual belief that people should be motivated to get married earlier than 30 years old, as it is beneficial for both the individual and society. I hold the view that it brings more negative consequences.
On the one hand, many people argue that marrying early is useful for the individuals because they get a chance to settle early and more easily in life. This might reduce their stress such as depression because they are able to share their thoughts and feelings with their partners comfortably. As a result, their life would become more enjoyable rather than boring. Another reason is that by traditions of a society is also fulfilled by following this custom. As many parents believe that by marrying their daughters before the age of 30, they would accomplish their obligation for them. Thus, it is evident why people favour this cause.
However, on the other hand, I believe that it is a cause of more detrimental effects. Those individuals who get married before 30 might get lazy afterwards. They do not want to acquire necessary skills which are harmful for a nation. For instance, many girls leave post-graduation studies due to early marriage. As a consequence, they do not share the burden of household income with their male partner. Secondly. Society cannot be flourished without female contribution in industries. Those societies, where both male and female do their job are prosperous in comparison to that part of the world where only men do the work. As it is also evident by western nations, their technological innovation is far away from eastern nations. Hence, it is clear that the late wedding is very essential for the betterment of human being.
In conclusion. Many people opine that marriage as soon as possible is good for the person and the society, whereas in my view, this is not important as marrying late is a good choice.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, whereas, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1554.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88679245283 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6898099796 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547169811321 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 5.43587174349 258% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.3328716501 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.3333333333 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.22222222222 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.344227257214 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0912406527525 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0940700750782 0.0667982634062 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218289174122 0.151304729494 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.055189303111 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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