Some people prefer to live in a house, while others feel that there are more advantages to living in an apartment.
Are there more advantages than disadvantages of living in a house compared with living in an apartment?
Based on the varied lifestyles of people there are different types of accommodation available today. Thus there is a raging debate nowadays where some people believe that there are many benefits of living in a house than in an apartment. I find this argument contentious when some people prefer houses over apartments due to a plethora of advantages. In my opinion, apartments provide myriads of benefits in comparison to houses thus I will present some facts and elucidate with relevant examples.
Firstly apartments are preferred by most of the families as they provide a plethora of amenities like security, gym, swimming pool, sauna, sports facilities make apartments a more favourable place to live. Additionally, all the complaints in regards to issues like electricity, water, internet and telephone are handled by the resident association which makes it very convenient for the local resident. Additionally, apartments have a clubhouse which makes socializing easier for the inhabitants. In India presently many there are many high rise condominiums which offer all these amenities in comparison to the houses. As per a recent survey from Economic times it was mentioned that around 80% of families like to stay in an apartment due to reasons likes security and amenities.
Additionally, prices of an apartment are competitive as compared to houses moreover when purchasing an apartment one can have multiple options to choose from. Recently my friend in Dubai bought an apartment on the forty-eighth floor which gives him a panoramic view of the beaches and the beautiful garden.
Though living in houses present some advantages like additional space, ample space for garden and parking but in my opinion apartments provide better facilities, security which are necessary for this modern era for a better living.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 102, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...types of accommodation available today. Thus there is a raging debate nowadays where...
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Line 3, column 240, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
... live. Additionally, all the complaints in regards to issues like electricity, water, interne...
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Line 3, column 404, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Two successive sentences begin with the same adverb. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...very convenient for the local resident. Additionally, apartments have a clubhouse which make...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, thus, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1545.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36458333333 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9428860361 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586805555556 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.9073309105 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.75 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274439079385 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.09277131389 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.082932436033 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158368700332 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0558224692087 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 50.2224549098 60% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.71 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.