Most of the information comes from internet nowadays. Some people say that a large amount of information we get is incorrect. Do you agree or disagree.?
In this modern era, biggest source of information is electronic media which through internet connects everyone. I completely agree with the statement that a significant portion of that material is false; reasons for my belief will be explained in subsequent paragraphs.
Firstly, internet give access to everyone without the discrimination of wisdom, which provide opportunity to every user to present their opinion without any restrictions. This ability of expressing viewpoint is called freedom-of-speech in developed societies, however, I believe that this leads to dire consequences. To explain more, when everyone start expressing their thoughts on conflicting matters such as politics, it somehow interfere with the immature minds and bend their thinking somehow as it get immensely difficult to distinguish right information from wrong. For example, constitution does not allow minor citizens to vote in elections but they still choose sides on internet creating a false image.
Secondly, most of internet sites and platforms such as Wikipedia and Facebook contain not strict filter to clear posts and comments which have no roots. This thing provoke malicious elements to spread controversy in society. For instance, police in Punjab caught an anti-social group who were diffusing religious hatred in society through social media for past two years and were behind the brainwashing of target killers. Furthermore, rivals in any field, such as businessman and even news channels, use internet to convey bad image of opponents by reporting false information which utterly misguide public.
In conclusion, extrapolating result from above reasons, it seems wise to say that many elements or even public could be spreading untrue knowledge through internet as it provides complete access without any filters.
- Some people think that rest and sleep are the best methods to relax while others think that it can be done by involving in some activities like sports. Do you agree or disagree and give your view? 89
- Some people say that money makes life easier and more comfortable. But others say that having a lot of money can bring some problems. What do you think are the advantages and disadvantages of having a lot of money? 84
- You have recently flown to another country on a business trip. You were satisfied with the fight, but didn’t like services at airport. Write a letter to the airport manager and say,1) Give you flight details2) Why were you disappointed?3) Suggest some i 61
- Most of the information comes from internet nowadays Some people say that a large amount of information we get is incorrect Do you agree or disagree 69
- Some people think that families have the most powerful influence on child's development. Others think that other influences like friends, teachers and means of media have much bigger effects. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 19, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ', the biggest'.
Suggestion: , the biggest
In this modern era, biggest source of information is electronic med...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 433, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'interferes'?
Suggestion: interferes
...ng matters such as politics, it somehow interfere with the immature minds and bend their ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 165, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'provokes'.
Suggestion: provokes
...omments which have no roots. This thing provoke malicious elements to spread controvers...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1550.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.67765567766 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97110018343 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.684981684982 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7043234869 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.909090909 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8181818182 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3636363636 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126543267531 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.04251817528 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0351185028971 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0745754845451 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00914151447906 0.056905535591 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.0946893788 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.96 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.5 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.