Some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play with. What are the advantages and disadvantages for the child have a large number of toys? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In this modern age, some parents believe showering their children with presents which consists mostly of large toys is a way of showing their affection for the children. In my own point of view, I am of the opinion that everything should be in moderation so to enable the children explore without being constrained by large toys only. This essay will outline the disadvantages and advantages of buying children large number of toys to play with.
On the one hand, children having large amount of toys to play with which were gifted to them by their family has 2 advantages which will be discussed in this paragraph. Firstly, having varieties of toys to play with helps the children to have confidence and sense of security to play on their own. Thereby, giving them the chance to explore different kinds of toys they have which will prevent them from getting bored. Also, this will give them a sense of belonging. For instance, they will be able to recognise what belongs to them and have the intuition to protect them. Secondly, this will help with their mental development and likewise they will acquire some if not all of the skills needed for early learning Thereby, giving them an edge amongst their peers in school which in the long run benefit them educationally.
On the other hand, having too much toys to play with could end up confusing the child thereby dazzling them. First of all, this can deter the children from exploring other things which could help with their developments for example, playing in the garden or in a park when the weather is decent which could help their physical development such as learning how to climb and also running. Secondly, their confidence level might be affected. For example, they might not have enough confidence around other children because they are not used to playing with others which could result to them withdrawing and having negative effects on them later in life.
To conclude, buying large number of toys by parents for their children to play with has it own pros and cons. But buying a reasonable amount of toys for children to play will help them explore other things and not confined to playing with their toys only and this will therefore help with the confidence level and also acquire social skills.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
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Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
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Message: Did you mean 'owns'?
Suggestion: owns
... for their children to play with has it own pros and cons. But buying a reasonable ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, likewise, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 41.998997996 157% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1884.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 391.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81841432225 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36631360715 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.457800511509 0.561755894193 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 549.9 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.4107086412 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.6 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0666666667 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.4 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.359385232412 0.244688304435 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.165613022639 0.084324248473 196% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116546812258 0.0667982634062 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.276701051136 0.151304729494 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.09260933821 0.056905535591 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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