You hired a car from a company and while you were driving on holiday, you had a small accident. You will have to write a report to the company to explain it.
Write a letter to the company. In your letter, you need to explain the following:
• when and where you hired the car
• describe how the accident happened
• what kind of action did you take after the accident
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to inform you that I have recently rented a car from your showroom at the Lavender’s street, Singapore for the duration of two weeks. while I was on my way to Johor Baru, I met an accident, unfortunately.
To elucidate, on the signal intersection, a car suddenly came and banged my car just on the driver’s door. It was a narrow escape. Traffic policemen present their registered a complaint against the driver and all the damages which happened to my car while be taken care by that person as agreed by him. The cops have registered his insurance and driving license details and both the cars are in their custody. I am sorry for this mishappening but it was not at all my fault.
I would like to request that a replacement vehicle should be offered as I have paid all the rent in advance. Your professionalism will be highly appreciated.
Looking forward to getting a rapid response.
Yours faithfully,
Ben
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 165, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: While
...ingapore for the duration of two weeks. while I was on my way to Johor Baru, I met an...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 796.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 168.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7380952381 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99600546609 2.54303337028 118% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.660714285714 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 251.1 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.890905843 44.8134815571 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.3636363636 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2727272727 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.81818181818 4.34317383033 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150677571502 0.216113520407 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0453277694435 0.0766984524023 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0552518126 0.0603063233224 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0772179826618 0.12726935374 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0794655274887 0.0580467560999 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.62 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.