Some people believe that international sporting events are the ideal opportunity to show the world the qualities of hosting nation. Others believe that these events are mainly a large unjustifiable expense. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Organizing a world sporting event is the dream of every nation because it helps to portray that country on the world map. However, some may argue regarding the huge sums of money it would require which could otherwise have been used to uplift the living standards of that nation. This is a debatable issue, let us delve deeper into its aspects in the ensuing paragraphs.
First and foremost, the country which earns the rights to host such a mega event that keeps people interested across the world, becomes the focus of attraction for not only wayfarers but also the foreign business investment . Therefore, it promotes the travel industry and also increases the job opportunity for locals. For instance, in 2008 when China became the host nation for Olympics , people around the world appreciated the beauty of this Asian nation and also a huge surge in local employment happened. Thus, to be the part of these prestigious world sporting events not only bring pride but also benefits for the local business .
However, some are of the opinion that for a developing nation, the priority is to provide basic amenities to its citizen and investing huge expense for such events is not justifiable. While people require better healthcare , improved educational institutions and advance infrastructure , authorities should be wise enough to fulfill the residents requirements first. Moreover, in underdeveloped nations where corruption still remains deep rooted , these events can be used by the officials to fill their pockets and stealing tax payer’s money. Therefore, holding such events may look attractive but it should not be done at the cost of poor people needs.
In conclusion, in my opinion it is very honorable and advantageous to host such humongous events for any nation as it brings business and global recognition but at the same time nations should not compromise with its development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, may, moreover, regarding, so, still, therefore, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1596.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18181818182 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77797566021 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590909090909 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.3345323586 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.0 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6666666667 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6666666667 7.06120827912 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199634409244 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0772771920941 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0459293494069 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121695820866 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0195780300924 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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