Humans tend to copy one another, especially in fashion, choice of clothes and consumer goods. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
People these days have the tendency to follow each other in term of trending fashions and latest gadgets owing to the availability and access of wide range of products in market. I firmly believe that social platforms such as facebook ,whats app and instagram are the major source of information for such trends .
First and foremost, people want to follow the fashion icons and has the ever increasing desires to replicate the dressing of the celebrities . While this development has brought the upsurge in fashion industry, outlook of people especially women has become indistinguishable in their appearances. Whether it is formal or casual clothing , people want to stay updated and keep their wardrobes ready for every occasion. Not only dressing sense but also the accessories such as handbags, watches and mobile phones are being replicated in order to improve the way one wishes to look. For instance, celebrities are widely followed on their social networks and their outfits have been admired or criticized by thousands of followers world wide. Thus, the access to personal and professional lives of famous people through social websites has certainly invoked the urges of their admirers.
Furthermore, ladies during social gatherings keep a close eye on sense of dressing and the variety of accessories people carry to attend various functions. Although it costs them a fortune to acquire those items, people of present generation do not hesitate to shell out money from their pockets. Some may argue this mad race of hoarding is unnecessary but to match up with peers ,people goes to every extent possible. To exemplify, a survey done in 2016 by Unites States Census Bureau in New York City about the modern day expenditure has revealed the clothing and gadgets were the top commodities bought by consumers.
In conclusion, the unrelenting yearnings of looking extravagant has made people to follow one another in terms of the clothes they wear and the add on that goes along with them.
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- In some societies more and more people are choosing to live on their own What are the reasons people choose to do this Is it a positive or negative trend 81
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, look, may, so, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1674.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13496932515 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72200286893 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628834355828 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 22.0615062761 49.4020404114 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 128.769230769 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0769230769 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.61538461538 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0807234772676 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0285031860351 0.084324248473 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0196394990132 0.0667982634062 29% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0495513168892 0.151304729494 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00768766402143 0.056905535591 14% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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