The gap between rich and poor is becoming wider, rich becoming more rich and poor even poorer. What problems can the situation cause and give the solutions.
The cavity formed by the difference of societal stratum seem to increasing. This essay will discuss the dire consequences that rise by this phenomena and will suggest some feasible solution to the problem in question involving the contributions of government and society itself.
Discussing first the effects, I believe the major repercussion is the accumulation of money in few hands resulting in destabilized economy. This means that as money is the exchange medium in the world, everybody would be restricted to get it by following rules created by rich which in turn would allow them to get hold of administrative system. In that scenario, while the wealthy will be able to enjoy their lavishing lifestyle, impoverished will be working hard for even basic necessities of life. Secondly, this difference makes it impossible for new entrepreneur to emerge which not only limit the options available in market but also terminate the likelihood of job opportunities which they might have created.
Coming towards the viable options for the mitigation of problem, firstly, Government can balance situation by creating a money flow which could only be achieved by taxation laws. Increasing taxes on expensive items and upper-class, and using that on provision of subsidy to poor will eventually lessen the space. Secondly, Government can encourage small businesses and industries by offering interest-free loans, just as the Chinese government is doing for the past decade. Finally, community can itself take part to minimize the effects by forming non-profit welfare organizations generating money through different sources like auctions and spending on underprivileged by making sources of income for them. For instance, NGOs' in Texas are training and providing jobs to homeless resulting not only in better society but also decreased crime rate has been seen.
In conclusion, while the effects of economic difference could be the monopoly created by rich, and the unconceivable thought of business start-up; I think that government policies and community societies can help mitigate the issue.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: these
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Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1781.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.48 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00049068965 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 558.9 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.8559422547 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.416666667 106.682146367 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0833333333 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.084066772808 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.027752617112 0.084324248473 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0277974186656 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0505987081559 0.151304729494 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0252315766711 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.8 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.03 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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