In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What is your opinion?
In recent years, due to rapid development in the economy, the demand for new homes has increased substantially. Some people insist on protecting the countryside, while others believe the only space left for building new homes is in the suburbs. In my opinion, I strongly agree with the later view. In this essay, I will support my view with examples.
Firstly, one of the major factors contributing towards the demand of housing is increasing population in cities. This is because people from various parts of the country are able to find jobs in cities. Therefore, new homes are needed for individuals, leading to expansion towards the countryside. To cite an example, many of them are moving to the suburbs of Toronto as there are several employment opportunities. Although If, there were fewer jobs available then, individuals would not have considered moving to cities.
Secondly, due to huge demand for real estate in the cities, the prices have gone through the roof. In order to meet their budget, people choose home which is more affordable. As a result, there has been a prominent increase in growth of houses. To illustrate, people find it very difficult to find any space in already well-developed cities like New York, leaving them no other option, but to move to which is New Jersey. However, if there was less demand for real estate then people would not have moved to the countryside, leading to a fall in demand of new homes.
In conclusion, it is a noticeable fact that demand for new homes has been increasing. In order to accommodate people, it is necessary to expand towards the countryside.
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Suggestion:
...gree with the later view. In this essay, I will support my view with examples. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, while, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1350.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94505494505 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79318861073 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564102564103 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.7211975657 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.375 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0625 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.9375 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327701691268 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0984602789244 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114578590391 0.0667982634062 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197378443499 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.076704336197 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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