Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
In recent years, the number of people migrating from one country to another has been increasing substantially. Residing in a foreign nation and communicating in a non native language can result in social and practical issues. I completely agree with this thought. In this essay, I will support my view with examples.
First and foremost, people shifting to a foreign land would need to adapt to a new culture and tradition. This is because such cultures as well as traditions are required not only for survival but also to develop new relationships. However, these sometimes may go against one’s virtues. For instance, Sikhs’ in India where turbans as a sign of their customs and traditions, while in the United States of America, which is considered to be a country for all religions and casts, such attire may be inappropriate and not acceptable in a social event. If persons did not migrate abroad, then cultural differences would not arise.
Secondly, individuals moving abroad for better job opportunities, face communication barriers. This is because they have to communicate with a foreign accent. As a result, the views expressed may not be entirely understood by the foreigner. To illustrate, engineers move to the United States of America, which is the hub for information technology, for pursuing employment opportunities hence communicating in the workplace in one’s local language may not be understood by many and can hamper the work. If foreigners settled abroad do not learn the foreign language, then tasks will not be achieved.
Finally, immigrants also face serious environmental changes. This happens because, weather conditions are different across the globe hence adapting to such climate will be difficult. For example, people moving from a hot country, like Dubai immigrate to a cold country, like Canada, where the temperature is below 0 degrees, may find it difficult to survive under such extreme conditions. If the migrating individuals learn new ways to adapt, then these issues can be ignored.
To conclude, people move abroad for a better standard of living and job opportunities. However, face serious social issues because of a difference in cultures. Furthermore, they also encounter numerous practical problems because of language barriers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, well, while, for example, for instance, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1942.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 361.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37950138504 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06098820486 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556786703601 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 612.0 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 61.4607151043 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.4761904762 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1904761905 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42857142857 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164354361506 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0542378252648 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0511153041959 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101639260852 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0539489431647 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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